I. Topic sentence:
How to stop Genocide? And turn the child soldiers into to what they have intended to be
A. Supporting detail 1:
What happens once they are out of the war?
1) Example/more details
War Child have given children the opportunity for education, and to be set apart from the life that they once had.
2) Explanation of example and how it makes this a good choice of aid agency:
The lady who founded the organization saw everything that they child soldiers are going through and what the people are suffering, she says that when she went to Baidoa, Samolia it was referred as the “City of Death” because all you saw was women in clinics holding dead bodies and young men walking around with rocket launcher. Since at the time her agency was very little she was put in a unsafe place, and from her being their she wanted to help and rescue child soldiers from the war, and educate them.
B. Supporting detail 2:
She started small and got big in the worse parts of the world
1) Example//more details:
It states that Samantha traveled to different countries, and saw nothing but war, and she said that “These experiences have given her a unique insight into the brutality of modern conflict” which means when most people think of war they don’t think of children fighting and killing recklessly any person that walks by, her eyes were opened to something new.
2) Explanation of example and how it makes this a good choice of aid agency:
An example is with her uncompromising and powerful advocacy for justice and peace; Dr.Nutt is one of the most sought after public speakers. She has inspired thousands of people across the continent to see global conflict as a problem that can and must be solved. What makes this organization a good choice is that she didn’t just research what each country was about she actually went there and became a speaker to end it
C. Concluding sentence(s)
War child is a good organization, especially of women that cares to know more about all the worst possible things that is going on in the world. This is why I chose this organization.
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